Thanks Roger, i seem to be having problems opening this in Max (Sorry im new)
im using an older version so cannot use the new from clipboard, im trying to save it in a text file and open it but no joy.
you'll need to do some alterations and first create a working patch before adding effects such as this, (The example you posted is not a very nice way of treating the [metro] !) best advised is to stick with tutorials and the tutarial patches untill you understand them and got a little bit of routine in creating and looking at patches.
It saves you a lot of time and your work will be more efficient.